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Dark Poetry #4
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0 posted 2007-07-15 06:43 AM


morning mist

sea birds driftwood

a thousand miles

from where you watch  

in fields of clover

the meadowlark

and rain


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1 posted 2007-07-15 01:07 PM


Tis one is pretty good
hope to read more

sarah


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2 posted 2007-07-15 03:59 PM


I really liked how well it flowed Nice work!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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3 posted 2007-07-15 05:51 PM


Thank you both very much, you're too kind.



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