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luvnh8rbalanced
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0 posted 2007-07-14 01:32 PM


Wish I could tell you, how hard I fought.         To keep you from falling into a rut, conformed and wrought.                                          This rut was no normal drain.                   Filled with depression, and self-hate and pain.
Everyday I’d get an e-mail, telling myself I could the world’s boulder                             Then I found out weighted tenfold on your  shoulders.                                         I wanted to hug you, right through the computer screen.
I wanted to talk, my insides would scream.
But that’s not how you would have it. You kept it wise.
You were a care-free young girl, in anther’s eyes.
At home, wars were disputed.
You kept your distance from your mother and your thoughts muted.
Then one day, you left the real you exposed
And of that little smiley girl, you disposed.
You real smile flashed, and your eyes showed perception.
You didn’t worry about difference, or acception.
I wish the world was more like you.
No “in” crowds, no “out” crowds. Nobody blue
People did their own thing. Nothing troubled them to then end.
Wish the world could be more like a few of my friends.

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luvnh8rbalanced
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1 posted 2007-07-14 01:47 PM


plzz be patient with the posting, tht as my 1st time
BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-07-14 01:57 PM


That's so true. I really liked the message this poem sent out. And welcome to pip You'll get the hang of posting.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

blue face
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3 posted 2007-07-15 01:03 PM


nice poem!
Welcome to Pip talk.
hope to read more

sarah


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4 posted 2007-07-17 08:02 PM


wow Great first post I loved it Welcome to Passions...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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