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Gifted
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0 posted 2007-07-02 07:05 PM



I feel like dying,
there is no substantial substance.
Besides dictionaries, I see no meaning in life.
This whole affair was beneath me, but now it's over.

Will I open my eyes to see another day?
Doesn't matter,
this vast spinning mass has lost its luster.
Death is easy, life is hard, and dying,
is the median trying to floss me between the two.

I'm silhouetted against cheerful smiles
with my arms folded.
No origami here, just watching life pass me by
like good grades on paper.

I'm just a laughing stock
for all to take a stab at.
Well, why not kill me while your at it,
and make it all easier for me?
I deserve nothing, including life.
I feel like dying.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

© Copyright 2007 Jonathan - All Rights Reserved
blue face
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1 posted 2007-07-02 07:43 PM


nice poem so true!

sarah


Gifted
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2 posted 2007-07-02 10:46 PM


Thank you Blue Face.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

BrittanyJ
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3 posted 2007-07-03 04:22 PM


Nice poem. I can really relate, hope to read more.

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

Gifted
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4 posted 2007-07-04 01:36 AM


Thanks BrittanyJ.  You might read more, who knows.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2007-07-05 05:51 PM


I really can realate to this yes an awful feeling. But it isn't better to be dead. 'cos murphy's law is something will be here to live for.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sullivanthepoet.com
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6 posted 2007-07-06 07:50 AM


Ah yes - anybody with a soul has visited that basement bar!!! But how bright is the light when you step back out onto the street?

"Live free in the world and owe allegiance to no man"

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