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treaties_without_justific
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since 2007-06-25
Posts 2
Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 2007-06-25 05:17 PM


It's tiring it all seems lost
Everything you once known is gone
It seems the harder you try to make it better
It's all lost before you know what to do

What are all these feeling
Your mind is telling you this
But your heart is telling you that
What is to become of me we will soon see?

The future has left you in its wake
Who's to say there is more to life than this
Eternal hardship for the crimes you can never pay
All thoughts all memoirs fade back to those days

Why rebuild when ruins just lies ahead
Look at all the bridges that have burned down
What is there to look forward to
When the simplest thing you wish for will never come true

Feel the ache as the heart begins to shake
The last quiver of your one last breath
You just seem to bury yourself in your own grave
It seems all you have to bargain with is this pain

The suffering of losing something
Feeling like you will lose it all in the end
They says it's for the better
But you think that's just

How could this change anything anyway
You're always on my mind it never ceases to amaze me
The smallest thing reminds me of you
In everything I do

Why rebuild when ruins just lies ahead
Look at all the bridges that have burned down
What is there to look forward to?
When the simplest thing you wish for will never come true

So tell me how will this change
The thoughts can only get worse from here
Will you be beaten out shot out
When I'm absent I'm distant when I'm so far away

So much will it be a waste in my absence
All the tears the bloodshed
Was it worth all your time?
Did I really even mean as much to you as you meant to me

Waiting for the world to fall must be better than this
The fear of losing you with every single breathe
An instant seems to far away
Let alone the months to come

Why rebuild when ruins just lies ahead
Look at all the bridges that have burned down
What is there to look forward to?
When the simplest thing you wish for will never come true

Reassurance what is there to say?
No one is coming along
Not with the thought of you at ever corner
Not with in my dreams

All I can say I hope these last few tears weren't a waste
All you have seen is a taste
There is so much more to see
It's even a mystery to me

© Copyright 2007 Jacob Isiah Ingram - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-01 06:59 PM


That was good. It was very full of emotion, i liked it

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

Virtual Abyss
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since 2008-04-09
Posts 52
East Coast - USA
2 posted 2008-04-10 12:08 PM


It looks like your on the brink of devastation making a final plea.  How did it work out?  It's been a while?  

V/r,

Virtual Abyss


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