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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
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Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-06-20 02:26 AM



Do you remember how you cried?
When you learnt that I had died

Each tear a whisper of my name
When you learnt I severed my vain

Do you remember how you felt?
When besides my grave you knelt


Do you remember how your body had shaken?
When you realized your life I had forsaken

Do you remember how you were screaming?
When you awoke from what you were dreaming.

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-02-03 06:42 PM


wow...........that's amazing. Just curious, what made you write it? You don't have to say if you don't want to. Again i say amazing.
Midnightdreamer


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