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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-06-19 02:49 AM



the sun flails our bare skin like a worthless slave
it hates us for what we are
they all hate us for what we are
they dont hate us because they despise us
they hate us for the power we have
the power that they desire
we are creatures of the night
we are vampires
neither living or dead
the living hate us for our immortality
the dead hate us for our mortality
we are the bloodthirsters
the taker of lives
the givers of immortality
but the price of immortality is high
sun eats our flesh
silver devours it
wood disentergrates it
but that is nothing compared to
the power!
the freedom!
but alas my time has come
the dawn rises red
as red as the blood pooling at my feet...
my blood.

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-02-13 06:40 PM


great poem.


midnightdreamer


firestorm
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since 2008-02-26
Posts 109

2 posted 2008-02-29 09:54 AM


would love to hear more about this.....
Britt_Brat
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since 2008-03-05
Posts 37
Knoxville, TN
3 posted 2008-04-02 03:15 PM


what made you think of this poem

im lost in a world of love

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