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Dark Poetry #4

help with a title??

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-06-17 09:53 PM

all i wanted was to make things better
while you wanted to tear me apart
i gave you all the love i could give
i gave you all of my heart.

you never gave a backward glance
filling me with a regret
you never even think of me
while you i can't forget.

my love i'll gaurd more carefully now
keeping watch for people like you
i'll hold my head high and never give up
and i'll get over my feelings for you.

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

1 posted 2007-06-18 11:17 AM

very nice i really like this but i can't really think of a title for it either maybe 'useless love' hmm i don't know but it was great anyway

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-18 12:04 PM

nicelly written

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

3 posted 2007-06-18 09:35 PM

i like it

maybe "unloved" or "in love alone"
i usually title mine then write i am just weird like that lol

Kitherion
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 181
Johannesburg

4 posted 2007-06-19 12:50 PM

Liked the poem, thinking maybe unrequitted?

"Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..."

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