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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
you expect me to just move on, and truly believe that we are done. but how can i just walk away when all i want to do is stay? how can i leave with half a heart when you own the other part? you expect me to just forget about the love, all of it? you only seem to really see the person that i'll never be. my love i've proved time and again, but you still won't let me in. i'm sorry that i put you here my love, you say, you'll always hold dear. but your thoghts are too loud becasue i can't hear a single sound. what you say just doesn't count my heart you have filled with doubt. so now i guess i'll walk away my heart in pieces, forever to stay. Okay, this poem is really old, and it's not the greatest i've written...so tell me what you think. Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
will the poem could use a bit of work but other thenthat its great. blue |
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tearsofpain Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 38 |
I THOUGHT THIS ONE WAS OK NOT BAD AT ALL SOMETIMES WHEN I LOOK AT THE OLD THINGS I WRITE IT ALWAYS SEEMS BETTER THAN THE THINGS I WRITE TODAY |
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