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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
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Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-06-12 04:16 AM


As the sun surrenders to the horizon to sleep
Giving over to darkness the land to keep
Creeping stillness the land does embrace
A silent dance of elegant extraordinary grace
Invading every crevice with its sense of calm
Every sense embraced in its cold unseen palm
Bringing with it a reluctant yield
Over all creatures who cling to the shield
Of warmth and happiness brought on by the sun
Dark and blank over the land does it run
Smothering all with its stifling cloak
Laughing silently at their pettiness like a joke
'til sunrise where night clings to the land in vain
Relieving it of its watch over its domain
Does the sun open its sleepy glowing eye
And silently rises to wish the night goodbye


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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
Posts 96
Johannesburg
1 posted 2007-06-12 08:47 AM


More of my poetry is under the alias of Decriel on page 4 i think it is, i would reall appreciate comments on them. As i dont want to resubmit them but i would like opinions so i may better my work

blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-12 05:03 PM


very kool discription
love the poem.


midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
3 posted 2008-02-03 06:18 PM


Why would you want to better your work? it's so wonderful!!!! I'm new but it's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Midnightdreamer


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