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darkblues
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0 posted 2007-06-03 04:41 PM


Spinning swords slicing the big top
Grinning fruit’s futile figs quick stop

The moment the fears belie true meaning
The realization blackout’s looming

Tunnelling down, funnelling
Toward a desperate distant dawning

Roses,
Even the black-light is fading

So long as you can still breathe
So long as you can still breathe

Oxygen suck it in quick before
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1 posted 2007-06-05 06:56 AM


I found this concept very interesting
"Even the black-light is fading"

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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