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tearsofpain
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since 2007-05-03
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0 posted 2007-06-03 04:06 AM



I HUG MYSELF BECAUSE LOVE WAS NOT GIVEN BY ANYONE ELSE
I REACH AND GRASP ONLY TO BE REJECT OH SO FAST
CAN THIS BE MY DESTINY
WELCOME TO MY MISERY
FIGHTING FOR WHAT I FEEL IS MINE
ONLY TO HAVE IT SNATCHED FROM BEHIND
YOU TRAITOR FILTHY DIRTY AND WRONG
I CANT WIN NO MATTER HOW STRONG
YOU CUT ME OFF AT THE KNEES
EVEN THOUGH I BEG AND BEG PLEASE
LIKE A LAQUER WALL
I CLIMB AND CLIMB AND ALWAYS FALL
LIVING LIFE THAT MAKES ME DIE
KNOCKING ME DOWN NO MATTER HOW I TRY
STANDING AT MY TALLEST
I STILL FEEL MY SMALLEST
MAKES ME WONDER WHAT IS ALL THIS
ALL THAT’S WRONG IS ALL THAT WORKS
ALL THAT PAIN AND ALL THAT HURT
A CRUEL JOKE TO YOU I MUST SEEM
I COME TO YOU WITH A LIFE I WISH TO REDEEM
WITH A FIST TO SHOW MY STRENGTH
YOU KNOCK ME DOWN WITH ONE LITTLE BREATH
NOTHING I AM YOU SAY TO ME
I WILL MAKE MY MARK YOU WILL SEE
TODAY I STAND AND THAT MAKES U WEAKER THAN ME

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-03 04:25 AM


I think you stand very tall
I think you are very strong

I think I am lucky to read your words

Alison

tearsofpain
Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 38

2 posted 2007-06-03 04:33 AM


thank u soo much this isnt one of my best but i thought i would post it anyway
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
3 posted 2007-06-03 03:41 PM


Very nice. I can relate to that! I loved how you put the words together nad made them sort of flow if ya know what i mean
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