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Danni_W
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0 posted 2007-06-02 12:33 PM


Circus is in town
lighting up the night,
cotton candy lover's lips,
holding hands through !House of Frights!

The Ferris Wheel is turning,
famous for 'first kiss.'
You almost feel immortal as
life holds few moments such as this.

Lemonade and funnel-cake,
A dollar for a ball
to "Hit a duck, get a dog!"
And one by one, you hit them all...

Circus' packed up, moved on,
trailing its magic behind,
and with it the girl of your dreams.
Prettiest gypsy you'll ever find.


©2007~DNW



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Danni_W
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1 posted 2007-06-02 12:34 PM


Sorry....Didn't mean to post it here.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-06-02 10:50 AM


Danni~
Welcome to PiP ... a sweet, fun=filled poem to mark your entry~

If you would like it moved to another forum, just contact one of the moderators listed and they can handle that for you with no problem~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Danni_W
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3 posted 2007-06-02 02:11 PM


Thank you M.T. for your sweet comment, I am glad that you like it, also for the advice.
Next time I'll pay more attention.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-06-02 02:26 PM


Danni~
If you'd like it moved to one of the other forums and I'll let someone in charge know~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Danni_W
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5 posted 2007-06-02 05:45 PM


Thank you, but I have already emailed one of the moderators. If I don't receive a reply back I'll take you up on that offer.
I see by your status you've been here a while. Thanks again, it is much appreciated.

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6 posted 2007-06-02 06:35 PM


Hey Danni,

I sent you back an email. Let me know where you want to put it.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2007-06-02 06:57 PM


AhDanni~
The Masked Man to your rescue~

Yuppers ... I have been here a wee bit~
Fun place to share and to make some life-lasting friendships~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2007-06-07 12:57 PM


raving lunatic? hmm well I guess it's possible some people can be like that. Welcome to Passions. Hope you do one day soon post in dark. Really liked this poem, great flow.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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