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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2007-05-28 12:23 PM

feeling sad
i cant breathe
dotn know what happened
how can this be?

i thought things were good
i thought things were right
now its all gone
and all i see is you in my sight

im watching you leave
as things fall apart
i watch you slowly slip away
as you carelessly break my heart

i thought i could trust you
i thought you were my friend
you said youd never hurt me
yet its over; we're near the end

i believed that you loved me
i hoped i could love you too
now its too late its over
and oh how i long for you

i am so confused
with no idea what to do
you were the one i wanted
the one i thought ws true

now i see i was wrong
you are just like the others
now im a hater
and you sure aint no lover

i wished that i could help you
i believed i could understand
now all my dreams have crumbled
and i need a new man

i received a little taste of heaven
that now i need to survive
but ever since youve been gone
i find i dont want to stay alive

"forever we will love each other
for it is our destiny"
i kept this phrase forever
for you wrote those words for me

why cant anyone love me?
am i really all that bad?
oh wait theres other out there
who are prettier and not so sad

i give up on love
it does not exist
its alright; ill move on
its just happiness ill miss

i see you holding her hand
sitting over there
you watch my tears fall down
and you dont even care

we used to be so tight
and were never able to let go
we caould all day and night
now its all over but why does it have to be so?

you used to adore me
now all that has changed
all you do is ignore me
and im left with all this pain

well let me tell you something
im not one to be used and abused
if you want to move on thats fine
but ill never stop loving you.

Smiling
Junior Member

since 2007-05-27

Posts 12
Barbados

1 posted 2007-05-28 11:47 AM

this happens to everybody i am going through your'e pain with you , i liked it , everyone can relate to heartbreak it's a vulnerable organ and u touched mine with your piece

Smiling

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-05-28 11:51 AM

thanx! yeah i wrote this after my bf broke up w/ me 3 days before our two month anniversary! But yeah your comments mean a lot to me.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-05-29 03:16 PM

wow I really like this welcome to Passions. great first post. ahhh yes, things will get better soon. I hope

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2007-05-29 09:49 PM

thanx hunnie girl! im pretty much over it now but i wrote a whole lot of songs and poems after it. i just cant find the time to post em' up yet. lol well n e ways nice 2 meet u.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

5 posted 2007-06-03 03:54 PM

Wow! Awesome poem! I loved it! I can't wait to see more!

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2007-11-14 10:45 PM

o wow forgot i had this and thank u!!!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

7 posted 2007-12-09 07:30 PM

it's a wretched, silly game we play, isn't it?

He's not worth it, trust me.

Find someone who understands you and isn't just trying to get laid. Try dating a gay man.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

8 posted 2007-12-09 10:31 PM

funny thing was...he was bi...but thanx again. and i know. hes in the past now. it would take a hell of alot of work for him to get me back into his arms. but thanx

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

KgIRL
Junior Member

since 2007-11-14

Posts 14
australia

9 posted 2007-12-10 07:38 AM

i really like this!! it's been 8 weeks since i broke up with my ex. and i still cry myself to sleep over him.
i'm sorry that your going through the heart ache

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

10 posted 2007-12-10 09:05 PM

KgIRL: thanx a lot! and its okay. its been almost five months and occasionally i find myself crying to slee also

itll all pass soon tho and we both deserve better

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

11 posted 2007-12-12 09:56 AM

Loved this one. It came from your heart and oozes with pure emotion. Strange how men can just through such love away.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

12 posted 2007-12-12 09:42 PM

thanx...and yea...it is sad...but they will realize wut idiots they r in the end when theyre alone. n e ways thanx a lot!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

13 posted 2008-04-16 07:00 PM

yeah i guess im an idiot then
well anyways cool poem

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

14 posted 2008-04-18 09:13 PM

i don't know anything about loving another person outside of a family but it hurts to lose someone important to you. great poem though!!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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