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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2007-05-26 06:17 PM



Someone somewhere can't handle me
They can't take me
They dress like me
Mock me
Beautifully

A false sense of resistance
Forgery
Stupid fool against me
Jesus loves me
Pardon me,
But you aren't me
So back off and let me be

You prostitute yourself
Ignorant jeallousy
The only rival oh so deadly
Leave me be
Escaping me

just to be happy...

© Copyright 2007 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2007-05-26 07:32 PM


first paragraph was BEAUTIFUL

as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have.

Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
2 posted 2007-05-28 09:34 PM


i agree i liked the first bit, can't wait to read more of your writing.

Abbeon

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