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the amazing emo kid
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since 2007-05-23
Posts 6
South Carolina

0 posted 2007-05-23 08:20 PM


Here.....

Here it is again

That feeling......

That horrible feeling

That feeling you get

When a piece of you is taken away

The feeling that washes over you

When you feel hurt, lost ,scared

USELESS!

It rips at your heart

And dims your sight

It messes with your thoughts

And you start to think

your losing your head

Soon it takes over

You dont know what to do any more

Pain.....

Pain becomes your friend

The way you see if your still

Here......

Stuck in this HELL called home

The place where your supposed to be

Loved, wanted, happy

NEEDED.

You Start to feel all alone

On your own and no where to run

TRAPPED.......

Prisoner in your own sick thoughts

the thoughts that got you here.....

To this place.....

YOUR personal Hell.


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hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
1 posted 2007-05-24 02:09 AM


Stuck in this HELL called home
The place where your supposed to be
Loved, wanted, happy~

hmmm yea right home, happy the only thing in common is the 1st letter Welcome to Passions!!! I really liked your first post can realte in so many ways. hope to read more
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
2 posted 2007-05-25 11:59 PM


i agree i am glad some one else understands. your writing is great please post more

hugs from abbeon

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