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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2007-05-12 07:35 PM


SCARRED

When did this all start?
How did it begin?
Many years ago,
deep cuts within.
A little harder,
I tell myself.
Be brave,
just make it be felt!
However it started,
I became numb.
So please make it stop.
Let this battle be won.
End this pain,
the hurt in me,
because the ones that bleed,
won't set me free.
Burning cuts,
or scars on skin,
cannot compare,
to the scars within!


~scarred is one letter more than scared. Scared to love, scared to feel, scared to express, scared to open up, scared to be ME!~


ELMO

"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today!!"

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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
1 posted 2007-05-12 08:06 PM


*sighs*...These words hit closer to home than you will ever know!
Thank you
†The Divine Sinner†

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

lovergurl
Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
va
2 posted 2007-05-13 05:01 PM


=/ I can relate to this poem. I love it, thanks for writing it and posting it.
Please, show some more of your work.
it's great.

Becca.

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-05-16 12:09 PM


Wow this was amazing I really can realte to this.. hope to read more soon...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
Johannesburg
4 posted 2007-05-17 12:36 PM


Amazing... ... ... it was so heartfelt. It cut me deep man, it cut me deep

"Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..."

stormdancer
Junior Member
since 2007-05-10
Posts 31
state of confustion
5 posted 2007-05-27 09:28 PM


absoloutly agree... Very good. I relate also...
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
6 posted 2007-05-28 12:25 PM


omg!!! this is awsome. you have no idea how much i can relate to this. i absolutely love it. cant wait to see more.
Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
7 posted 2007-05-28 09:18 PM


Amazing and so real. i feel as if i can completely understand (but i know that i can't) please write more.

Abbeon

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