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mged
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since 2007-03-29
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0 posted 2007-04-27 03:48 PM



Flame and Brimstone so great
Those lost in heat those that
have endeverd so much to be sucssful will fall
only I stand alone down here only my soul alone have I
I feel out of place
like I dont belong
alone in fire

Alone in Brimstone
Feeling no pain
A wrath of the slain
death has me,
This is all so real
I hear a sund so faint
a beep so sweet
I wake to the sun on my face
I know now what hell is like.

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2007-04-27 09:44 PM


Huh... well I thought this was pretty good. i like it. It kind of reminds me where i was 2 years ago. I thought you did a great job on this. I hope to see more from you. Thanks for sharing with us.
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