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mged
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since 2007-03-29
Posts 39
ND

0 posted 2007-04-25 03:48 PM


this dosen`t make sense.I wrote it fast so ya

The years of old
The world`s fold
The hartstring`s cold
The lord hath told
The devil looks for souls to be sold
will you come and live
or will you die and be forgot

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2007-04-27 10:58 PM


I think it makes since. I thought you did a great job. I hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for sharing.
ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
2 posted 2007-05-31 11:50 AM


It made perfect sense, reminds us of options we have.  Good piece.
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