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Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-04-23 12:43 PM



Gone and Forgotten

Alone in the darkness,
Unaccompanied in the silence,
Forgotten by the world,
Gone from the light.

So he fell,
Great glorious splendor lost,
Fouled by pride,
Sustained by revenge.

But still he sits,
Alone in the darkness,
Unaccompanied in the silence,
Forgotten by the world,
Gone from the light.

“But lo! See this,
These women are the fruit of the land,
Why then should we not eat?”

And now he sits,
Accompanied in the darkness,
Followed in the silence,
Revieved by the world,
Creating Darkness.

In the Great War, the splendor
Of battle shall be seen.
He shall once again be in light,
In blinding brilliance, unparalleled splendor,
Until all shall sit,
Alone in the darkness,
Unaccompanied in the silence,
Forgotten by God,
Gone from the light.


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Rottiestyl
Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60
Illinois, USA
1 posted 2007-04-26 05:22 AM


Like peeking in to an empty dark room from behind a black curtain.Very solemn but potent piece.
mged
Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39
ND
2 posted 2007-04-26 09:56 AM


This is very good, very open. this i loved.

KEEP ON

MannyNelemi
New Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 9
Houston
3 posted 2007-04-27 12:05 PM


indeed dark...i like!
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