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rrrstop
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since 2007-04-21
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Florida

0 posted 2007-04-21 01:04 PM



Your place at table
was here, before they killed you
at that rehab place.

© Copyright 2007 M.W.Coleman - All Rights Reserved
alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
1 posted 2007-04-21 01:31 PM


I read and reread this...just because each time I could put a different meaning to it. To me that is a wonderful write, when you can stop, think, and rethink your mind because of the words!
Thank you!

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-04-26 12:33 PM


Really short but gripping.. Welcome to Passions.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

mged
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since 2007-03-29
Posts 39
ND
3 posted 2007-04-26 10:03 AM


HOT but short try to put more. none the less very good
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