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[StepheN~] Junior Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 15 |
The warm sun beaming in my face. I feel my heart beating harder and harder every single day. A beautiful girl and a wonderful smile. For you, the only girl I would go the extra mile. From your smiles and hugs maybe sometimes kisses. I feel my love growing and I make many wishes. You’re the best thing that has ever happened to me. You glide smooth like riding on angel’s wings. I hope my words show a sense of passion. Cause for you-******, My love is ever-lasting. Stephen~ |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
A simple easy love poem. Nicely done. |
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rrrstop Junior Member
since 2007-04-21
Posts 27Florida |
The rhyme scheme is on-and-off, but that actually works here. Say, isn't this the "dark" poetry forum?  |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
okie doke, this is getting weird for me. you must, no you can't. that would be inconcievable. beautiful poem i loved it. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Sekishu Junior Member
since 2007-09-17
Posts 36 |
simple but good well done i dont think this should be on the dark poem forum tho but then again what would i know? |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well done indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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