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alibaster
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In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2007-04-17 07:54 PM



The tea is warm.

Hurry. Hurry.

Run fast out of the storm.


Tip your cup daintily.

Skip. Skip,

with the Queen of hearts playfully.


Eat your tarts.

Dream. Dream

with vicious smiling cat that ate the larks.


Pretend nothing is the matter.

Faster. Faster.

Tripping towards twisted love of the Mad Hatter.


†The Divine Sinner† ©

Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

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1 posted 2007-04-18 12:48 PM


I really like this it has a good structure liked the last part....
hunnie

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Twilight Warrior
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2 posted 2007-04-18 05:43 AM


Just the fact that I watched Alice in Wonderland made like this peom alot. Good write.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

rrrstop
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3 posted 2007-04-21 12:02 PM


Sadly, how often we do have to pretend that nothing is wrong, just to survive the day. Tea can be soothing if not adulterated too much. This is a good write that I can somewhat relate to.
alibaster
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4 posted 2007-04-21 01:29 PM


Tea...how I do love a good, hot, relaxing cup of tea. Seems to make the world go away, if only for the lasting until the last drop!
Thank you!

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

lovergurl
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va
5 posted 2007-05-08 11:08 PM


I LOVE it.
simply because,
I've never read anything like it before.
wow,
great job.
hope to see some more of your work.

Becca.

chunkstar666
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6 posted 2007-06-04 05:31 PM


makes me want to swing my arms and run for a cup of tea and forget this world
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