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music_is_my_soul
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since 2007-04-07
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MA, USA

0 posted 2007-04-09 07:40 PM


These don't relate to each other, but they are just topic starters, cause I can't put them into a powm. Please let me know if you've written anything from these

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I feel so alone inside
It makes me want to die

How can I live without him?
When he acted without whim

His life ended in a car
All I have is the scar

From my body is red
I can't get out of my head

Life has no meaning
I feel so pleading

Let me go now!
You just ask, HOW?

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I lie on the floor
Just pleading no more

As my life ends
I don't think of my friends


Maybe they relate to each other, maybe they don't, but I put them out there for other people to use. I want you to take them, and write depressing things with them. PEACE OUT!

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[This message has been edited by Nan (04-10-2007 12:09 PM).]

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