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voice2bheard
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0 posted 02-12-2008 01:18 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I need to breathe, I need to take what life gives me

I need to slow down, take a look at everything I see

I want to sing, as loud and as beautifully as I can

I want to live my life, and be happy, I don't need a man

I see a chance, to be greater and be better in my life

I see a way, that I can try to make thing right

I love my friends and family, they mean so much to me

I love a boy so much, and still he doesn't see

I have several problems, I'll admit that its true

I have several confessions, but I won't tell them all to you

I hate it when I cry, because I know thats not how I want to be

I hate it when others hate me, thats not what I want them to see

I believe that whats happening to me, everything is real

I believe that living everyday like its your last is how I really feel

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 02-12-2008 01:19 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about everything how I feel just whatever I wrote down.

Kate

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2 posted 02-12-2008 06:09 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i don't know if you want relating feelings but that poem took the feelings right out of me. The poem is great, it just reminds me of myself so much.  Great job.
midnightdreamer

voice2bheard
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3 posted 02-14-2008 08:56 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you glad you relate

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 12-16-2009 04:37 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

pretty much about life?

Kate

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