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Dark Poetry #4

I need, I have, I want the list goes on. . .

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-02-12 01:18 PM

I need to breathe, I need to take what life gives me

I need to slow down, take a look at everything I see

I want to sing, as loud and as beautifully as I can

I want to live my life, and be happy, I don't need a man

I see a chance, to be greater and be better in my life

I see a way, that I can try to make thing right

I love my friends and family, they mean so much to me

I love a boy so much, and still he doesn't see

I have several problems, I'll admit that its true

I have several confessions, but I won't tell them all to you

I hate it when I cry, because I know thats not how I want to be

I hate it when others hate me, thats not what I want them to see

I believe that whats happening to me, everything is real

I believe that living everyday like its your last is how I really feel

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-02-12 01:19 PM

This poem is about everything how I feel just whatever I wrote down.

Kate

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-02-12 06:09 PM

i don't know if you want relating feelings but that poem took the feelings right out of me. The poem is great, it just reminds me of myself so much. Great job.
midnightdreamer

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2008-02-14 08:56 AM

Thank you glad you relate

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 04:37 AM

pretty much about life?

Kate

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