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mged
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0 posted 2007-04-03 10:17 AM


this is my frist so i dont no if it will be any good


a pit of darkness fallen deep
the sun shines in nothing
when the darkness closes
around me i feel a sadness
only i can see
the very fiber of life fallen apart
the love of my life gone
nothing left to share nothing but darkness everywhere

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mged
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1 posted 2007-04-03 10:19 AM


this is my frist so i dont know if it is any good but this is something that is dear to me
mged
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2 posted 2007-04-03 04:42 PM


hey marcus wut up nice poem. Oh shape so cute, luv of life huh well hope ya have fun. tt ya lata . tootles. peace
mged
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3 posted 2007-04-03 04:44 PM


this is from someone else,one of mged's friends. so wuts up marcus. so how many other poems are ya gonna right well ttu later and have a GREEEAAATTT DAAAYYY!!!!!
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4 posted 2007-04-04 12:41 PM


when the darkness closes
around me i feel a sadness~

I can relate to this... Very good although short. Welcome to Passions
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Kira Aso
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Closer to Hell...
5 posted 2007-04-15 12:50 PM


Welcome to PIP!!!
Very nice poem! Be good and have fun!!

Lots of Luv
Kira

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

alibaster
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6 posted 2007-04-17 01:07 PM


Welcome, Welcome, Welcome...
Lovely indeed!
†The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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