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darkblues
Junior Member
since 2007-02-20
Posts 27


0 posted 2007-03-20 05:42 PM


Wake up in bed
blood everywhere
ten minute snooze alarm
get up twenty later
go to brush teeth
look in mirror
punch mirror
shards glass
guilt smacks
keep fists flying
knuckles smashed
hate seeing
back to bed
then real battle starts
minds exploding
why do it
why do that
freak anger flashes
slowly subsiding
thinking blood transfusions
fall asleep
wake up in bed
blood everywhere
ten minute snooze alarm.....



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Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2007-03-22 04:35 PM



Hey there! I really enjoyed this though I can't really tell you why... (grins)

Liked lots!!!


~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

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