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Thebaer
Junior Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 10


0 posted 2007-03-18 10:02 PM


So long it seems
Luke warm eulogy
Why am I so happy?
None come from meaning
Tears by force I must persuade
It must not of hit me then
But now I feel it
Tears well again.

© Copyright 2007 Barry Ervin - All Rights Reserved
Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2007-03-22 08:08 AM



Very deep. Fewer words the meaning more.

Luved lots
Kira

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

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