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EmoAnime
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0 posted 2007-03-09 09:20 AM



When I was a little girl my sister was melested. That day my whole life changed.

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EmoAnime
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1 posted 2007-03-09 09:36 AM


Late last night I went to bed
not knowing that tommorow morning my soul would be dead.
I closed my eyes and started to pray but something had strayed my thoughts away...
A hand over my mouth and someone says,
"please don't scream,you don't want to die."
He pulled back what was leftof my self.
I was too scared to even cry
Both arms in one grip, I prayed from his hand my wrists would slip
I prayed to god to save my soul
But this was just the beginning of my struggle.
The world seemed to stop and move by really slow
Especially in the darkness where nothing but fear ever shows.
I wanted get away; to be free but an extremely sharp pain went right through me.
The mystery man left and I laid there and wept.
One day I will find you and confront you of what you’ve done to me
You took something sacred…
My….

Twilight Warrior
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since 2007-02-22
Posts 106
The World That Never Was
2 posted 2007-03-09 03:33 PM


The organization could have been better, but poetry is more about content than grammar anyway. The best poems usually stem from truth. From our own experiences do we give birth to true poetry. Good write.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

3 posted 2007-03-12 07:57 AM


when i was whole i had one
everyone wanted it
long hair and a quick sense of words
when i was whole they needed
sometime within
sometime without
sometime in
and
well
you get the point
but everyone had one


unholyjudgement
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since 2007-02-27
Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next
4 posted 2007-03-12 09:04 AM


true wisdom lies
in the heart
of an ill treated child
who wounds will heal
and heart will seal
but memory will never die

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