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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2007-03-09 07:08 AM



Trials

They strech out before me like a pit
another hurdle before which I sit

The sun looks down and mocks my state
Watch the loser whose life is fate

Every step is a race toward an end
An unfortunate outcome I don't wish to attend

Getting through is pain
Reaching out my back strains

Everyday a new trial I see
Another unscable wall rises before me

Trials
Trials

Are they just an end in themselves
Or a step in the road till i'm put on the shelf

Trials
Trials

They lie still before me
Will I ever, O will I ever be free  

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

© Copyright 2007 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Twilight Warrior
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The World That Never Was
1 posted 2007-03-09 03:35 PM


Good poem, I think trials are a part of every man's life. Don't sit there too long.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-03-13 12:57 PM


Are they just an end in themselves
Or a step in the road till i'm put on the shelf~

I love this not one of my favorite but it's climbing the charts
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-03-13 05:15 AM


sigh

I think you just tweaked my dial.

I'm so tired tho, we can skip my trial and go directly to the hanging.

Nod.

This'n was dark alright. I guess I'd better go do some stretches. A new day dawns.

yay


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