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Dark Poetry #4

Passengers Despair

UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2007-03-05 09:43 PM

Back home in the darkness...It's been a while.

I feel cold like a junky deprived of his wares,
My dreams are shattered and I don’t even care,
Ideas of reference are interrupting my flow,
Where the train of thought goes now, even I don’t know,
For all my time on Earth I’ve got nothing to show,
Nothing except a handful of mediocre lyrics and poems,
So I row, row, row my boat frantically down the stream,
Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily, I let out a scream,
And if life is but a dream than I guess I’m wide awake,
To regress back to the junky, now, I feel I’ve got the shakes,
If I had my cake, I’d eat it too, but, honestly, what is it to you?
There is nothing left to do but procrastinate,
It fascinates me, these feelings of haste,
I am headed towards something,
On a journey to where?
But a passive passenger,
With endless despair.

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

1 posted 2007-03-06 04:02 PM

damn i like it a lot!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-03-07 12:39 PM

wow yah I think so too... damn
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

3 posted 2007-03-08 08:21 PM

Danke

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

4 posted 2007-03-22 04:59 PM

WOOT, WOOT!
I totally loved this poem!!!

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

5 posted 2007-03-22 05:34 PM

Nice work. Wish you the best of luck on your journey to nowhere.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

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