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What Is It For?
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What Is It For? |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
What Is It For? What do you love me for? Why do you wait every day For me to come, bringing lies That fill with mirth blear eyes? But I can bring nothing more. You see that cold in my glance - Your bitter tears try to say That I mean everything to you, But I don't wipe them away. It hurts me to realize Your destiny's in my hands, Without me you can't live... Why live a lie once again? I can't pretend loving twice, So I'm leaving, forgive. Beside the window you sit And mourn the love, never got. It's all you want - just to know If I come back here or not. I can't on destiny cheat, You know - I did it before, I'm unforgiven for it. Each time I walk out your door I wonder what it is for... |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Well, maybe you shouldn't be coming back again and again if only to hurt this person with your presence. It's a cruel act, but *shrug*, that's what a poem is for, to express emotions and yes, even cruel intentions..you've described the scene quite clearly though, and maybe a bit dispassionately. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Cruel? Who cares about being cruel? (Looks around stupidly) Seriously though, this was really good and I quite enjoyed it. I don't think you wrote it to sound dispassionate but hey everyone has there own way of looking at things. Some people will argue the sky is pink when it's really blue. Keep writing no matter what since your feelings are what your trying to get out there cruel or not. (Hugs) ~Should the truth be so buried |
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