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chiLanta
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0 posted 2007-02-25 07:07 PM



You'll never see the bright of day
or the ocean's tide
You'll never know what it is to love
and How it feels inside

You'll never get to run and play
or See the sun shine down
You won't get to feel pain
Like falling to the ground

You'll never get to laugh out loud
You'll never see my smile
The sparkle in my eyes that tells
you are worth all my while

You'll never get to grow up
or Have any memories of life
You'll never get to experience death
or Understand strife

I'll never get to touch you
or Kiss your little face
I'll never get to show you love
or feel your sweet embrace

I'll never know you
I'll never look into your eyes
I don't get to say i love you
because you already rose to the skies
To the baby I lost


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-02-25 11:47 PM


Awe this is so sad. I am sooo sorry for your lost. if you don't mind me asking what happened? I really like this poem the flow worked in well, and it was so full of emotion...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Seeker72
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2 posted 2007-02-26 12:28 PM


A very sad poem.

I liked it, even though it was of such a harsh loss.

Twilight Warrior
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The World That Never Was
3 posted 2007-02-26 02:40 AM


A very beautiful poem. My condolences for your loss.
chiLanta
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4 posted 2007-02-26 01:24 PM


had a miscarrage around 4 months into the pregnency, about a year and a half ago.  sometimes it still comes to my mind
hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2007-02-26 11:38 PM


awe I'm so sorry for your lost, it must have hurt bad, well if you even need to talk just email me ...
hunnie

butterflylp
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ky,usa
6 posted 2007-02-27 02:35 PM


I have lost a child and I think that your poem was a wonderful way of exprssing the grief that accompanies such an experience.
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