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Grand_Daddy_Tale_Spinner
New Member

since 2007-02-23

Posts 6

0 posted 2007-02-23 01:42 PM

How many more days will seem like today?
Justifying ever single statement I've made.

Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops.
Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose.

How easily stenciled and perfectly prim.
Are the faces of freinds now seeming grim.

This is the same, menotinous swill.
Contained in the grains of a straglers will.

So be as it may, or maybe it's not.
Worth all this fighting that won't stop till we rot.

I'm sick of your pretense and full of you lies.
Let us just stop this, before one of us dies.

Can you not harness, a moment to feel.
Instead of your best, shot at a deal.

I've nearly jumped from the brink of hate.
But pulled myself back, sure that it's fate.

Yet, one can only handle so much of this stress.
Before they're laid in their coffin, and put down to rest.

So if a truce is a truce, and thats what it be.
Then pack your stuff and, get away from me.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-02-23 02:18 PM

GDTS~
Welcome to this wonderful circle of poetic friends~

We will come to know you through your words~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-02-24 09:32 PM

I really like this, more than your other one. it was really good.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

3 posted 2007-02-24 11:13 PM

Very good sir.

I liked it very much.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

4 posted 2007-02-25 06:48 PM

Truly enjoyed!

~Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops.
Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose.~
(Fav part)

Welcome to PIP!!!

Lots of luv
Kira

RavenSmith
Member

since 2007-03-02

Posts 53
Oregon

5 posted 2007-03-03 03:47 PM

yah I agree with Kiara, loved, "Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops.
Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose."

I could relate to this poem. Wonderful. But, I tell yah, the noose only gets loosened when your not walking backwards anymore. Back steps are necessary, healing of course, prior to being open to vulnerability again. Wonderful teaching lesson's in this poem. Nice choice of words and insight here.

~Best Regards,Raven Smith

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