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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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i never thought something could hurt so much. to have known you all my life together always and then suddenly not. that default bond of loving you like a brother never expecting anything from each other we just had to be there and we were. my entire life was with you my whole childhood was laced with memories of us not always being kind but always there. over time you faded i still saw you and thought of you as the one who, unconditionally would be there for me to stick up for me when i needed you. age forced us to part our familys still close memories still raw but distance weakening our bond but you'd still be there, right? wrong. it hurts. like nothing i've ever felt before to have someone you loved and saw as a brother to you completely disregard and belittle you who is she? i don't know her. she's pathetic, she's stupid i wouldn't give her the time of day. i pretended for a while that you would, maybe still be there for me but then i saw you saw the new you and realised you care less for me than i could have ever expected how the hell could you do that?? i can't even see how that is possible to know me and love me all my life up til now, where you won't even acknowledge me i can never forgive you for this. i hate you. yet, for some reason if you need me i'll be there. as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
L.W.D. I was struck this morning with a random idea to go and check out pipTalk. I'm glad I did. Your poem was incredibly honest, something I've always liked and it was accompanied with your familiar sound, flow, wording. If it helps any, my love, I actually honestly can relate. I know. C.K.V.R. ... Hollow. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
i already want to cry now i want to cry even more thank you... i feel so much like that today and i feel better to know i am not the only one you are really really good |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I really enjoyed this. These few lines really struck me... "i can never forgive you for this. i hate you. yet, for some reason if you need me i'll be there." It's tough seeing someone you knew from childhood change right before your eyes. It's always a weird feeling to think you "know" someone, and then, poof, there a completely different person than anything you could possibly imagine. Just keep writing, and one day, you will meet that someone that will make you forget all about your childhood friend. This poem was really fluid, and I look forward to seeing more. |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
woah. i was just on the web and suddenly just had an urge to visit piptalk.....havent been here since 4th form i think. i really like this poem. really honest. have a good hols xox xoxGinaxox |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
ohmigosh i only just clicked who this is about. wow. good on you. xoxGinaxox |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
bahah this was written after a heated night with him. fully embarrassed of it now ay its stupid as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Very emotional...I am at aloss for words. Keep the faith! |
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