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Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England

0 posted 2007-01-15 11:07 PM



Guilty M’lud   guilty as charged
Life has been strange life has been hard
I thought I was right to put up a fight
It’s easy to reason
In the clear of the light

Had it been you it would have been right
Then who would you blame
For the wrong or the right
Reason is easy
If you had to fight

Guilty M’lud I don’t give a fig
You’re so overpaid sat in a wig
No need ramble or shout
Put me away now
I soon will be out

© Copyright 2007 Eric Lance Davies - All Rights Reserved
ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
1 posted 2007-01-19 02:47 AM



Guilty M’lud   guilty as charged
Life has been strange life has been hard
I thought I was right to put up a fight
It’s easy to reason
In the clear of the light

This piece brings back all the decisions we make and sometimes regret with hindsight.....but obviously they were correct at the time (in our mind).

It also points out who we are really judged by...... personal responsibility can be the ONLY judge.

All are right and all are wrong
while
none are right and none are wrong

Another deep poem in a 'punchy' style....

Have Fun,

Ivor

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
2 posted 2007-03-05 12:17 PM


i enjoyed this
arthur

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