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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-01-09 10:28 PM


Insane
hunnie

Day in day out another fight,
This one lasted well into the night,

You always blame me even though it's him,
My pride still stays but my spirits dim,

I can't get back the love I lost,
You all can't see how much this has cost,

If I stay here with all this pain,
I might just go insane.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
sgreybe
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1 posted 2007-01-10 07:12 AM


Great poem Hunnie!
Sylvia

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2 posted 2007-01-10 09:48 AM



sad
"My pride still stays but my spirits dim,"
i like that line though

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-01-10 11:00 PM


ummm thanks...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Kira Aso
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4 posted 2007-01-11 01:58 AM



Oh hunnie this was so sad! (sniffs)
I luved every part and it had such an impact on me.

You're poetry is loved and very much appreciated hunnie.

Hugs and Hershey bars are being sent your way!
Luv Kira  

Sarka
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5 posted 2007-01-14 11:03 AM


Excellent poem!!!  I really liked that you still have strength "My pride still stays but my spirits dim"  I hope your spirts will rise soon.

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

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