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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2006-12-30 10:43 PM



independent
or walking alone
I cannot ever shine again
so who cares about the wording?

Your chains pull on me
I want to go down with you
but I can’t dig a hole deep enough
(I don’t know where they took you)

my hands are so empty

every room feels so cold
but I think it’s just when I walk in
I generate my own morgue
carrying my dead with me

time is just another
stab to the heart
it takes you further away from me

I remember how I cried
the first time I saw you
because I knew you were
supposed to be mine

my hands are so empty

just another pain that gets
pushed back more and more
never really moving on
holding you there

just like every other one

black lace around my throat
just so others will think of you
but they don’t know
they don’t know...
I think (I hope) someday it will
choke me

so empty
they can’t remember
my hands
they forgot

A warrior poet once said
you're not dead yet
so live
like you could be

© Copyright 2006 Stephanie White - All Rights Reserved
click1
Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
1 posted 2007-01-06 12:59 PM


such loss...well put!!

             Thanx!!

Click

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2007-01-06 01:22 AM


WinterWren, this is an exceptional read...
Thanx for sharing...
*coco*

Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
3 posted 2007-01-06 09:42 AM



"WOW" pretty much sums it up.

Awesome write!
Luv Kira

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