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Eryn Lasgalen |
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Draugluin Junior Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 48Ontario, Canada |
This is my first post, this poetry is from a song I wrote for my Band, and is therefor lyrical .It's about inner voice and finding yourself in silence, and is inspired by Tolkien's Myrkwood Forest from "Lord of the Rings". Eryn Lasgalen Losing your way, in your mind, in the haze! Something behind (ohhh)... lest we remind you... close your eyes...step inside, lose your way! Something inside (you).... longing to find you.... Dark and ancient Forest, whispers nieth the night, evoking unseen mystery, beyond the pale moon light walk amidst the forest hear the howling winds, listen to the laughter, as eternity begins. Let her find you, in your mind, in this place! ...as she becomes you...the ritual begins... Close your eyes...step inside lose your way! Something inside (you)...is going to find you... At last when night has settled, no mortal will know nor care That amidst the ancient forest, we had stood there All is now forsaken, only the spirits that remain, fill the air with madness, and sadnesss wrought in pain [This message has been edited by Draugluin (12-08-2006 08:20 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know anything about song writing..but I like it. What does your title mean? ( and do you mean this tobe ancient in the line:That amidst the acient forest) M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah,Eryn Lasgalen, wood of green leaves~ it is the new name of Mirkwood Forest. I welcome you to Passions.. and look forward to seeing more of your work. Hugs~Nancy Sing in me muse... |
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Draugluin Junior Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 48Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for your intrests in the poem, it's actually from an album i'm currently working on and there happens to be nine more similar songs ( the album is called "Nine winds enslaved"), all with fantasy inspiration..i'll post more as they are finished. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Thats good and since it one of your first it can only get better |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to PIP. i liked that what type of music is it? hope to read more songs or poems from you... hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
Wow thats really cool I'd like to know what type of music goes along with that as well...great job! Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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Draugluin Junior Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 48Ontario, Canada |
The type of music is heavy metal/blackmetal, the music sounds alot like say "opeth" for example. It's heavy but very melodic. |
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