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mechanical_animal
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0 posted 2006-11-30 08:31 PM


Requiem for love (the heart is deceitful above all things),
Anything but loneliness,
Surrounded by nothingness.
Drowning (peering through the depths and seeing nothing),
Sinking in the abyss,
Surrounded by nothingness.
Requiem for life (a gathering beyond the edge of darkness),
Dreading the emptiness,
Surrounded by nothingness.



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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-12-01 11:51 PM


~Dreading the emptiness,
Surrounded by nothingness.~

very nice and Welcome to Passions...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

secret_truth_lies
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2 posted 2006-12-29 07:23 PM


nicely done. I hope you like it here as well, even though it's a month later. I really like this. I hope to see more from you very soon. Thanks for sharing with us.
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