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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-11-19 01:16 PM


I want to explain this poem.  This is my opinion on love, not as real events in my life.  Thats all.

Today I married a stranger

We were in love
What else could be said

It would have been perfect
If  I wasn’t afraid of being raped
By every one around me

So I wrapped my body around his
Thus I had security in my ignorance

-Juju
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJsoHJHUrfo

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (11-19-2006 05:57 PM).]

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CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
1 posted 2006-11-23 11:04 PM


Liked it a lot and loved the video of it as hearing a poet readin out loud always makes in more personal :-)

Jazvina Lahre aka CrEaTuRe

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
2 posted 2006-12-26 10:54 AM


what a sad and evocative poem

arthur

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