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niere
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since 2006-04-23
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0 posted 2006-11-18 07:21 PM



Hello again people, I know I've been gone for quite a long time (my last poem posted was before the summer I believe) But I decided to post something again as I haven't for ages... I missed this place a lot too
Anyway, enough of me rambling!


Preparation For Pain.

One way tubes are implanted in my visions tool,
While downpouring funnels are embedded in my hearings aid.
One robs me of insight,
And the other replaces it
With the desires you create in me.

Walls enclose this emotion,
And so never has a wait seemed so long.
For your distant smile,
Your immoralities, your passion.
Next week maybe, I'll be able to climb.
But for now, I'll sit and ponder you.

You moistened my mind with your toxins,
And I crave more, more,
(Or maybe less?) - I'm unsure.
I had so little of you, but my eye is beginning to twitch
And my hands are shaking...

Addiction is eminent I suppose.
Captured by your sweetness,
And caught in your tidal rapture like a blade
Of grass trapped in a waters romantic waltz,
I succumb to allowance of a disease
That I know can rip me apart.

You drop, and I ripple.
Is that your game?
I'm preparing to fall,
But can you tell me if it will be graceful?
Because the soil is stained with my blood,
Sacrificed in false love,

But can I trust you to make this time
All worthwhile?  

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trUstNooNe
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since 2006-05-21
Posts 91

1 posted 2006-11-20 09:00 AM


"Captured by your sweetness,
And caught in your tidal rapture like a blade
Of grass trapped in a waters romantic waltz,"
that is my favorite part the way you decribed the way you feel is inspiring..i really enjoyed this..

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