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0 posted 2006-11-14 12:29 PM



Hindsight
hunnie

i hate it whaen you look down on me,
because there's more to me than you can see,
you treat me like i don't belong,
you've always done this, all along,

how can you be so blind,
maybe hates messing with your mind,
i nedd help yet you refuse to see it,
you ignore me, in your world, no sister of yours is in that big of a pit,

well i'm not a child i don't need your friendship,
i've tried once before, lost, and i don't double dip,
i'm not stupid, retarded or slow,
you'd think that after 15 years you'd know,

i wish i could look up to you,
but that is something i could never do,
because you are not always right,
i know that now thanks to hindsight.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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1 posted 2006-11-14 10:17 PM


Man can I relate to this poem you had written. I'm 17 and my sister is 20. I thought I would always look up to her when I was younger, but that had changed when I got into highschool. I didn't look up to anyone at all. Not Even the man above. I was in a dark stage all the time. But I don't ever regret anything that goes towards her. But I know where you are coming from. I really thought this poem, might go to everyone that'son here. Thanks for sharing with us.
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2 posted 2006-11-15 03:12 AM


Good write

Can difinitly relate

Hope to see more!!

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3 posted 2006-11-15 09:45 PM


i can definitely relate to this. my sister is 3 years older than i am and at first i thought i could look to her as well, but now i see that she's just an example of what i wont be. she sounds like your sister from what i can tell from your poem.
lovely read, by the way.

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
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4 posted 2006-11-15 10:36 PM


thank you all for your replies
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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5 posted 2006-12-02 12:31 PM


same hunnie, thats my word as well
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6 posted 2006-12-04 12:01 PM


thanks
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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