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cherrys_rule
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0 posted 2006-11-10 02:44 PM


Ten perfect fingers
Ten perfect toes
When your life ends
nobody will know

When you come out
They will surely cut the cord
The doctors will count down from 3
3,2,1, and watch you die on the board

When you go up to heaven
I'm sure you don't know what just happened.
I'm pretty sure God will give your mom some strife.
But God will definitely give you eternal life.

By Courtney A

[This message has been edited by cherrys_rule (11-12-2006 01:07 PM).]

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cherrys_rule
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1 posted 2006-11-12 01:06 PM


Tell me what you think about this poem.
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2 posted 2006-11-14 12:39 PM


wow i really liked this courtney
hunnie

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cherrys_rule
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3 posted 2006-11-14 08:26 PM


Thanx, i really like this one out of all of my poems.
secret_truth_lies
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4 posted 2007-01-06 09:57 AM


Hey Chica I really like this poem. Its really true as well. I hope ppl listen to the point that you are trying to make. Great job chica.
cherrys_rule
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5 posted 2007-04-24 08:05 PM


I just hope that they don't think i was the one that was getting the abortion. Oh by the way who ever is reading this I hope you know that I am all against abortions. i could go all in detail, butI won't. So I hope you all like this one.
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