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midnightdreamer
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0 posted 2008-02-09 01:56 AM



What's worth living for?
What's in it for me?
What's the point?
I don't have the answers
But i wish i do
Because I can't take it anymore!

Meaning of living
I don't know
Meaning of helping
I don't know
Why should i keep helping?
When i get nothing but pain in return?

All I wanted was some respect
All i got in return was disrespect
I wanted a friend
I got an enemy instead
When i tried to fit in
I got pushed away
When i helped
I got pained

I just want a friend that understands me
Who is there when i need them
Someone i can count on
Someone i won't get pushed away from
Someone to accept me for who i am
Someone that can count on me
The way I can count on them

Someone that can keep their promises
Someone that won't lie to me
Someone who i can call
My best friend



© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
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1 posted 2008-02-23 09:36 PM


i wrote this when i was thinking of my sister and some of my friends. i'm not going to tell you the meaning of this poem...that's for you to figure out.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2008-03-02 06:03 PM


awe, this is a sad yet sweet poem. I like the way your last stanza's flowed together. Great job,

   {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

midnightdreamer
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3 posted 2008-03-02 10:07 PM


thank you.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

midnightdreamer
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4 posted 2010-03-15 02:28 PM


you know... i found that friend finally and he was right along side me along


stupidgirl101ash
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5 posted 2010-03-17 01:21 PM


I think it said a lot about you in little words. i liked it.

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