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Dark Poetry #4

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TwiztidKarma
Junior Member

since 2006-09-22

Posts 43
Florida

0 posted 2006-11-09 01:38 AM

   Crazy doom, And a flower blooms,
  Boom KaBoom, your out , before I count
  to 2,
  Played your cards damn you messed up
  fool,
Angel of death, Bloody eyes black ,
So gloom,
  Beautiness and Tenderness I would assume,
Id love to give you a kiss but it would
all end to soon,
  Roamed a carnival,
  Oh,
  Heres a balloon,

Saturated pain to slowly seep through skin,
Beautiful purple eyes ,
I got lost in your haze,
One day ended,
To end both our days,
I see all grey ,
But you spark color in my lone dismay,

So shall we stare upon Mother Moon ,
And in minds begin to pray,
Please dont let this night end,
For' Tommorrow, I cant see you again,
  Brings forth another bad day,
To dream and stare around at my
four corners all day.

[This message has been edited by TwiztidKarma (11-09-2006 11:40 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-11-09 10:25 AM

Your foul/obscene language (or attempted masking of same) is totally unacceptable in these forums !

**Thank you for editing out the really BAD BAD word**
Remember, please, that the guidelines are in place for a reason ... and everyone should abide by them to make this place enjoyable for all~

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

2 posted 2006-11-24 10:31 AM

I thought this was some what confusing, but in a good way. i don't know is that makes any since. But you did a a good job on this. I hope to see more from you. Thanks for sharing with us.

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