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Feel a Pain you will feel a Life
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Feel a Pain you will feel a Life |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
To smile in pain is not what I want for who knows the pain itself is smile, The life which misses the pain is the life which is never agile. Tomarrow when you feel alone paint a smile on your lips if you can, But the smile wont help you any more because the lips can't do what they can. Ink flows and words take birth the nib presses against the surface, Who knows the nib feels a pain for the pain never gives up the chase. Feel a pain you will feel a life forget the days when you laughed in vain, For if you have ever felt the desert you will also feel the RAIN. No one stands by anyone, for all are weak did you find anyone who is not the same? If you have found then ah!! alas you will lose as this is a dirty game. Happy are those who feel the pain did you find a person who knows the same? If yes then come together for all pains will surely give some gains........ JvJ God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
I have just tried to give an answer by means of some lines which I penned.... to those who feel that pain is killing them.... remember if you are buckling under whatever pain you feel now...dont let ur heart do that.... u will see a light tomarrow.... my first poem which I wrote a few months back and my first post in piptalk..... God gives and forgives, we get and foget [This message has been edited by jvj-003 (02-08-2008 01:42 AM).] |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
Hope you will find an answer for your loneliness in this God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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jessie Junior Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 44AUSTRALIA. |
this is great and very true most pain is invisible from the outside but in the inside it hurts alot like a heavy weight pulling you down verywell  jessie |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
Thanx jessie!!! well you are corect. Pain is like an anchor which tries to hold you to a particular phase of your life... but remember it is us who have to know that we need to unlock this anchor and sail on to the next phases of our lives which will bring smiles only because we had endured the pains which we got in the journey..... Thanx for your comments.... JvJ God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Wow I loved your poem I thought it was beautiful and I almost cried when reading it. Kate |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
Hi Nice to see that you liked the poem!!!! And it feels more happy to know that am able to touch the hearts of people by means of my words that I penned.... Thanx JvJ God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
hope you all will like this poem as others have liked it!!! God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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