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0 posted 2006-11-06 12:46 PM


Many die tonight,
And babies being born in the same flight,
No mercy in the eyes of God,
He sheds no tear, as he takes one life;
And gives one back,

How can he choose who lives and dies?
But death is always around the corner,
And life just blooms out of nowhere,
I can’t make sense of this scheme he leads,

Following his plan, I do the best I can,
Promising myself to better the next day,
Knowing that it might not come, and
I might just pass away feeling hopeless,

We look up for the answers, but never
Ask the one who is about to leave this place,
Or a baby who just took its first breath,
Many die getting high, and others
For living life to the fullest.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-06 05:59 PM


Knowing that it might not come, and
I might just pass away feeling hopeless,

i really like this line. It just stuck out there for me to see it. This line has so much meaning to it. You always have to live everyday acting like it's your last one. So just enjoy life.

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