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Dark Poetry #4

Ocean

openthoughts
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 94
Where the child can be free

0 posted 2006-10-25 06:55 PM

These waves, feasting greedily
all upon a helpless shore
that must be protected
(though few overcome their blindness)

Hold onto your rock,
your strong and faithful anchor
so that you at least will remain steady
while the world erodes willingly at our feet

Understand that I look not from the top down
but up from the crushing bottom

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2006-10-25 11:51 PM

The last line "up from the crushing bottom" really spoke to me. Poigantly written.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2006-10-27 07:49 AM

Really liked the crushing part the image. Specactular

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