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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-10-24 01:06 AM

what do you see when you look at me,
do you see my eyes sad and unhappy,

what do you feel when you see me smile,
do you know i haven't done that in a while,

what do you say when you email all your friends,
"man she's messed up." then you click send,

does it give you pride to discuss my pain,
gleefully waiting for me to go insane,

what do you say to your parents at night,
what a life, she's some sight,

if i told you what was really going on,
i'd be talking to you until the break of dawn,

if i told you how much i cry,
would you laugh and say so do I,

maybe there is more to me than you think,
you might miss it, so don't blink,

what do you see when you look at me,
do you see my eyes wishing forever to be carefree,

well what do i see looking in your eyes,
a painful hurt of your deep despise.

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

1 posted 2006-10-25 05:25 AM

This sounds awfully familiar.

Been there more than once.

Touchs a nerve i guess.

That's the reason i gotta into poetry trying to impress someone not very interested in me.

Worked to, didn't help, but did impress. So she went the way and the poetry stayed. Believe me it was better.

People in my experience are basically flawed anything they do is based around those flaws.

Unconditional dislike is just a persons way of dealing with feelings they don't understand.

Poetry is from inside it tells you who you are. Not just who someone else wants you to be.

So what you do is you reach down way deep inside below all those idiots and losers. Right down to the nightmares your own hatreds and bring them here. Put them in the dark or maybe pass em on to open (if you want just anybody to read them.)

Any you don't need advice from me this is just how i do it.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-10-25 02:18 PM

wow thank you that was a really nice response it made a lot of sense and it gave me more than just a good job or i liked that not that i hate those:P
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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