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Dark Poetry #4
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openthoughts
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 94
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0 posted 2006-10-15 07:14 PM

Destroying Upwards

I pity all those who woship these tombs,
these cages of beasts.
They are a trap, built from death and disguised.
No one is fooled.  Some simple choose not to see.
I cannot love these reapers of beauty.
Not when they are forced upon me.
Continue to burn down creation
and don't be surprised when soon
there's nothing left to burn since ourselves
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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442
1 posted 2006-10-17 11:18 AM

Man I really like this poem. And it's very true. You did an excellent job thinnking and writing it out. I love this poem. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us.
           Courtney
shatteredsilver
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since 2005-03-31
Posts 63
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2 posted 2006-10-21 10:00 PM

Lovely. Creepy, yes; angry, yes; something I can see as far too possible, yes; but lovely all the same.
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